Wednesday, April 10, 2013

Goldilocks Persuasive writing

 My opinion is that Goldilocks should think before she acts.

Firstly, she broke into the bear’s house. She didn’t have the right to go into the house. It’s against the law and the thing that she did was totally not right.

Secondly, she used things without asking and broke things. Goldilocks should have thought before she touched their stuff. She couldn’t even replace them. She doesn’t even own the things that she broke.

Thirdly, she left when they came home. The thing that Goldilocks did was disrespectful she ran out without apologising to the poor sad bears. She is such a rude disgraceful little girl. How would you like it if someone came into your house and wrecked everything?

My opinion is that Goldilocks should go to jail.